Ok, so those pencil things I did, well, I did them on too small a scale in my opinion, so i've done a new one A2 size, and I'll obviously shrink it down.
I'm not gonna write much about it because its 4am, i'm REALLY tired, and i just spent AGES scanning in 7 different sections of this and lining them up on photoshop in order to have it on a computer. effort.
the more i look at it, the less happy i am with it... but i am incomprehensibly tired. so i'll judge it again in the morning.